Story 1: To overthrow the Utopia (Part 1)
Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2018 8:21 am
Hello everyone. For a while now, I've been thinking about trying to write my own story. Today, I've decided to make the leap. I wanted to thank Tirepanted for their own excellently-written stories, that gave me the inspiration to try myself, so you can say that the following story is dedicated to their hard work.
Just two clarifications. First, the story takes place in a fictional country and a fictional universe, but its level of technology is similar to ours. (I just felt more comfortable using a fictional place from another (non USB-related) project of mine). Second, English is not my native language (hence the reason why I hesitated so long before writing the story), so I apologize in advance if their are mistakes. Don't hesitate to correct me in the comments or in a PM.
Introduction
Olympus. Hera. Ares. Okéanis. Smog. Naïad. Korê. Lakeland. Karst. Rift. Shield. Kachikuni. Artemise.
Two-hundred-and-seventy-four years ago, these were free countries.
Then, Constantin Basileus unified Olympus’ Twelve Factions under his banner and sent his armies to conquer his neighbours. His son and then his grandson continued his work. And then, after a hundred years of war, the last free remnants surrendered. The once free nations became ’’Provinces’’, under Olympian rule. The time of Olympus’ domination began.
The descendants of Constantin named their Empire ’’Utopia’’, as they believed that their Nation would become the greatest of the World.
Time passed.
Technology marched on.
The name of the country stayed the same, even after the Basileus dynasty was overthrown by its own governors, the Flamens, who then created a government in which they would collectively hold the power.
But the change of power didn’t help the Provinces. To keep their power, the Flamens decided that the Provinces needed to be… pacified.
Liberties were suppressed. Those who spoke against Olympus were arrested or eliminated. Entire villages were slaughtered for the actions of a few rebels. Leaving the country was forbidden.
Some chose to grovel, accepting the Olympians’ rule in order to share the scraps, sometimes even actively helping them.
But others… chose to fight.
**************
Aster carefully pruned the plant. It was one of her finest creations, with its long leaves and the color gradient of its flowers, from rose to white.
Totally worth the years of grafts necessary to reach the result.
Aster had proudly entered her thirties a few years ago. But no need to ask for her exact age, she wouldn't give the answer to you. And even then, a sane way of life – and a few plant-based products – helped her look younger that she was.
Aster had a physique typical of the people of the Province of Korê: tanned skin, brown eyes, and shoulder-long black hair.
In the eyes of the good society, Aster Demeter was a florist, as well as a model wife, married to the model owner of model Olympian-approved company Demeter & Sillo Associates, which owned fields in both Korê, Lakeland and Ares.
She worked a lot to create that image.
While she was admiring her new plant, she heard the door opening. Dimitri entered the room.
In theory, Dimitri and Aster were husband and wife. In reality, their marriage was a cover to hide their real activities. Dimitri and Aster were part of an influential resistance network fighting against the Olympian oppression. She saw their marriage more as a partnership, and he shared her sentiment. Dimitri was more comfortable around men anyway...
"Your friends are here." he announced.
"Great. Can you close the shop during a few days for me?"
"Looking for new plants?"
"Of course. Gotta make new grafts, now that this one succeeded"
He smiled knowingly.
"Good luck then."
"Thanks, honey."
**************
Looking for new plants for her shop was the excuse she and Dimitri used to explain her irregular movings. In reality, she was looking for an other type of things during those times. She was looking for informations.
People often think that the rebels were nothing more than a rowdy bunch of fighters, ambushing soldiers or Olympus sympathizers. What they didn't know was that most of the activities of the Rebellion were geared towards the collect of informations.
It was Aster's speciality, but she had her own peculiar method. That often involved disguise and infiltration. As well as getting uniforms from (often) unwilling donors.
Her three partners were already waiting for her in the back room Asteroften used to concoct her schemes.
"You're late." Mikani remarked.
She had a rather plain physique, with dark eyes and rave-black hair tied into a ponytail. Her skin was rather pale, giving her a fragile appearance. (Although Aster knew that, in her case, appearances were deceiving.) Mikani was from the Province of Smog, which was rather infamous for its numerous factories and its pollution.
She was a new recruit. This was Aster's first big mission with her.
"Fashionably late." Klenia added, with a little smile.
With her voluptuous figure, the young woman offered a great contrast with the plain-looking Mikani. Klenia also had beautiful hazel eyes, a soft almost perfect skin, and long lustrous dark brown hair, which she often braided after the fashion of Korê and Lakeland. She was the most enthusiastic about their missions. (Even a little too much sometimes...) Including (especially...) the parts revolving around... aquiring the disguises.
Aster already mounted several operations with her, so she was used to her quircks by now.
Both Klenia and Mikani were rather young, in their mid-to-late twenties. Like many others, they joined the Rebellion after Olympus took one of their loved ones.
The third member of Aster's team, Aaria, kept silent. She simply gave a nod to her leader.
Aaria was from Korê, just like Aster. With her short boyish brown hair and hardened features, she passed herself for a man quite a few times during missions. She was older that Aster, in her early forties at least, but life hadn't been kind to her and she looked older.
Aaria was the kind of woman that keeps everything for herself. She rarely spoke and, when she did, she was quick and concise. Usually, she was the one monitoring the missions, without taking an active part into the infiltrations themselves.
"So, what's the plan?" Klenia asked.
"Ladies, this time we are after a big one." Aster put an envelope on the table and pulled a picture out of it. "Let me introduce to you the Phocas Institute, one of the biggest laboratories in all Utopia. In three days, the Institute will hold a conference about a new software created by Olympian computer scientists. A software designed to protect the Government's websites and communication networks from our cyberattacks and cyber-espionage."
"So our mission is to gain informations about this new software, so that our hackers will be able to create a counter?" Mikani asked.
"Pretty much."
"How?"
"Students in computer physics from all Olympian-aproved Universities have been invited to assist to the event. Two of us will disguise themselves as female students, and attend to the conference." Aster looked at Klenia and Minaki. "I hope you're ready to take some notes..."
Klenia let out a groan.
"Boooooring..."
"Well, at least there is still the part where you have to acquire the student uniforms." Aster answered.
The thought made the young woman smile again.
"Explain."
"As you know, during official events, students have to wear the official uniform of their University. And the students invited are all in the last years of their cursus. Of their long cursus Therefore, they are about your age. Perhaps only a few years younger."
Klenia finished her sentence. "So we'll have to convince two of them to... donate their uniforms for the greater good..." Her smile widened. "Neat. When do we start ?"
Suddenly, Aaria spoke up. "You forget one thing. The Phocas Institute is in the Province of Ares."
Her declaration instantly dampened the younger woman's enthusiasm.
Ares was, along with Hera and Okéanis, a Province loyal to Olympus.
"That's right. We'll have to be careful about that." Aster agreed.
"How do you plan on replacing two students?" Aaria asked." You can't do it at the Institute itself. It will be well-guarded."
"No worries. Dimitri and I have been working on this plan ever since we've learned about the conference. Thalès has been on it for three weeks now."
"So, what did the weasel find?"
"The weasel found the list of Stormfist University's students attending to the event."
Stormfist was one of Ares' biggest town and, coincidentally, the Phocas Institute was situated in its periphery.
"Apparently, the University paid some transport companies to drive its students to the Institute."
"Bus?"
"Cars."
"Talk about a waste of money..." Mikani commented.
"Well... We are talking about a place run by Olympus, so that was a given..." Klenia answered.
"But it's an advantage for us." Aster said. "I know when and where each group of students is supposed to get picked up. Some of them are female-only. And some of them are groups of two. Mikania and Klenia will take the place of one of those, attend to the conference, and get all the knowledge we need about that new software."
"Fair enough." Aaria said. "I suppose I'm in charge of monitoring everything. But what about you?"
"Well, Mikani and Klenia will need a chauffeur. And we certainly can't keep the one sent by the transport company."
Aster gave her friends a knowing wink.
"Once at the Phocas Institute, I will have to wait for the conference to end... Which will probably allow me to... ''visit'' the place. I'm sure there are a lot more interesting things in it than the software."
"No fair!" Klenia exclaimed. "You'll get all the fun while Mikani and I do all the work."
Aster shrugged.
"Leader privilege." she said while smiling.
Klenia let out a noise of frustration.
Aster ignored her.
"Everything is clear?"
"Yes!" three voiced answered in unisson.
"Then get on the van, ladies. We hit the road!"
Author's note: Sorry this part hasn't had any interesting scene yet. I just wanted to introduce the characters and the setting first. The next part is already written and (hopefully) will be added soon, in the next few days at worst.
Just two clarifications. First, the story takes place in a fictional country and a fictional universe, but its level of technology is similar to ours. (I just felt more comfortable using a fictional place from another (non USB-related) project of mine). Second, English is not my native language (hence the reason why I hesitated so long before writing the story), so I apologize in advance if their are mistakes. Don't hesitate to correct me in the comments or in a PM.
Introduction
Olympus. Hera. Ares. Okéanis. Smog. Naïad. Korê. Lakeland. Karst. Rift. Shield. Kachikuni. Artemise.
Two-hundred-and-seventy-four years ago, these were free countries.
Then, Constantin Basileus unified Olympus’ Twelve Factions under his banner and sent his armies to conquer his neighbours. His son and then his grandson continued his work. And then, after a hundred years of war, the last free remnants surrendered. The once free nations became ’’Provinces’’, under Olympian rule. The time of Olympus’ domination began.
The descendants of Constantin named their Empire ’’Utopia’’, as they believed that their Nation would become the greatest of the World.
Time passed.
Technology marched on.
The name of the country stayed the same, even after the Basileus dynasty was overthrown by its own governors, the Flamens, who then created a government in which they would collectively hold the power.
But the change of power didn’t help the Provinces. To keep their power, the Flamens decided that the Provinces needed to be… pacified.
Liberties were suppressed. Those who spoke against Olympus were arrested or eliminated. Entire villages were slaughtered for the actions of a few rebels. Leaving the country was forbidden.
Some chose to grovel, accepting the Olympians’ rule in order to share the scraps, sometimes even actively helping them.
But others… chose to fight.
**************
Aster carefully pruned the plant. It was one of her finest creations, with its long leaves and the color gradient of its flowers, from rose to white.
Totally worth the years of grafts necessary to reach the result.
Aster had proudly entered her thirties a few years ago. But no need to ask for her exact age, she wouldn't give the answer to you. And even then, a sane way of life – and a few plant-based products – helped her look younger that she was.
Aster had a physique typical of the people of the Province of Korê: tanned skin, brown eyes, and shoulder-long black hair.
In the eyes of the good society, Aster Demeter was a florist, as well as a model wife, married to the model owner of model Olympian-approved company Demeter & Sillo Associates, which owned fields in both Korê, Lakeland and Ares.
She worked a lot to create that image.
While she was admiring her new plant, she heard the door opening. Dimitri entered the room.
In theory, Dimitri and Aster were husband and wife. In reality, their marriage was a cover to hide their real activities. Dimitri and Aster were part of an influential resistance network fighting against the Olympian oppression. She saw their marriage more as a partnership, and he shared her sentiment. Dimitri was more comfortable around men anyway...
"Your friends are here." he announced.
"Great. Can you close the shop during a few days for me?"
"Looking for new plants?"
"Of course. Gotta make new grafts, now that this one succeeded"
He smiled knowingly.
"Good luck then."
"Thanks, honey."
**************
Looking for new plants for her shop was the excuse she and Dimitri used to explain her irregular movings. In reality, she was looking for an other type of things during those times. She was looking for informations.
People often think that the rebels were nothing more than a rowdy bunch of fighters, ambushing soldiers or Olympus sympathizers. What they didn't know was that most of the activities of the Rebellion were geared towards the collect of informations.
It was Aster's speciality, but she had her own peculiar method. That often involved disguise and infiltration. As well as getting uniforms from (often) unwilling donors.
Her three partners were already waiting for her in the back room Asteroften used to concoct her schemes.
"You're late." Mikani remarked.
She had a rather plain physique, with dark eyes and rave-black hair tied into a ponytail. Her skin was rather pale, giving her a fragile appearance. (Although Aster knew that, in her case, appearances were deceiving.) Mikani was from the Province of Smog, which was rather infamous for its numerous factories and its pollution.
She was a new recruit. This was Aster's first big mission with her.
"Fashionably late." Klenia added, with a little smile.
With her voluptuous figure, the young woman offered a great contrast with the plain-looking Mikani. Klenia also had beautiful hazel eyes, a soft almost perfect skin, and long lustrous dark brown hair, which she often braided after the fashion of Korê and Lakeland. She was the most enthusiastic about their missions. (Even a little too much sometimes...) Including (especially...) the parts revolving around... aquiring the disguises.
Aster already mounted several operations with her, so she was used to her quircks by now.
Both Klenia and Mikani were rather young, in their mid-to-late twenties. Like many others, they joined the Rebellion after Olympus took one of their loved ones.
The third member of Aster's team, Aaria, kept silent. She simply gave a nod to her leader.
Aaria was from Korê, just like Aster. With her short boyish brown hair and hardened features, she passed herself for a man quite a few times during missions. She was older that Aster, in her early forties at least, but life hadn't been kind to her and she looked older.
Aaria was the kind of woman that keeps everything for herself. She rarely spoke and, when she did, she was quick and concise. Usually, she was the one monitoring the missions, without taking an active part into the infiltrations themselves.
"So, what's the plan?" Klenia asked.
"Ladies, this time we are after a big one." Aster put an envelope on the table and pulled a picture out of it. "Let me introduce to you the Phocas Institute, one of the biggest laboratories in all Utopia. In three days, the Institute will hold a conference about a new software created by Olympian computer scientists. A software designed to protect the Government's websites and communication networks from our cyberattacks and cyber-espionage."
"So our mission is to gain informations about this new software, so that our hackers will be able to create a counter?" Mikani asked.
"Pretty much."
"How?"
"Students in computer physics from all Olympian-aproved Universities have been invited to assist to the event. Two of us will disguise themselves as female students, and attend to the conference." Aster looked at Klenia and Minaki. "I hope you're ready to take some notes..."
Klenia let out a groan.
"Boooooring..."
"Well, at least there is still the part where you have to acquire the student uniforms." Aster answered.
The thought made the young woman smile again.
"Explain."
"As you know, during official events, students have to wear the official uniform of their University. And the students invited are all in the last years of their cursus. Of their long cursus Therefore, they are about your age. Perhaps only a few years younger."
Klenia finished her sentence. "So we'll have to convince two of them to... donate their uniforms for the greater good..." Her smile widened. "Neat. When do we start ?"
Suddenly, Aaria spoke up. "You forget one thing. The Phocas Institute is in the Province of Ares."
Her declaration instantly dampened the younger woman's enthusiasm.
Ares was, along with Hera and Okéanis, a Province loyal to Olympus.
"That's right. We'll have to be careful about that." Aster agreed.
"How do you plan on replacing two students?" Aaria asked." You can't do it at the Institute itself. It will be well-guarded."
"No worries. Dimitri and I have been working on this plan ever since we've learned about the conference. Thalès has been on it for three weeks now."
"So, what did the weasel find?"
"The weasel found the list of Stormfist University's students attending to the event."
Stormfist was one of Ares' biggest town and, coincidentally, the Phocas Institute was situated in its periphery.
"Apparently, the University paid some transport companies to drive its students to the Institute."
"Bus?"
"Cars."
"Talk about a waste of money..." Mikani commented.
"Well... We are talking about a place run by Olympus, so that was a given..." Klenia answered.
"But it's an advantage for us." Aster said. "I know when and where each group of students is supposed to get picked up. Some of them are female-only. And some of them are groups of two. Mikania and Klenia will take the place of one of those, attend to the conference, and get all the knowledge we need about that new software."
"Fair enough." Aaria said. "I suppose I'm in charge of monitoring everything. But what about you?"
"Well, Mikani and Klenia will need a chauffeur. And we certainly can't keep the one sent by the transport company."
Aster gave her friends a knowing wink.
"Once at the Phocas Institute, I will have to wait for the conference to end... Which will probably allow me to... ''visit'' the place. I'm sure there are a lot more interesting things in it than the software."
"No fair!" Klenia exclaimed. "You'll get all the fun while Mikani and I do all the work."
Aster shrugged.
"Leader privilege." she said while smiling.
Klenia let out a noise of frustration.
Aster ignored her.
"Everything is clear?"
"Yes!" three voiced answered in unisson.
"Then get on the van, ladies. We hit the road!"
Author's note: Sorry this part hasn't had any interesting scene yet. I just wanted to introduce the characters and the setting first. The next part is already written and (hopefully) will be added soon, in the next few days at worst.