Ellana's Cultural Studies on Humanity Chapter 40:- Nikki Vs The Mafia Pt3 The Hospital

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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Aug 05, 2024 3:56 pm
Indeed, with animal tranquilisers you don't even need to get the dosage right. Just put it into the gun, squeeze the trigger and it's sleepy time for our hapless paramedics. With no one the wiser.
Yep, none of the worrying about the proper dosage. There is no question that once the drug enters the woman's blood steam its over for her.

Of course there is always a little worry about overdose so our intruders will always want to check the pulse to make sure when their mission requires the targets to be left alive.

Of course here I am not sure Green would have cared all that much.
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meditions142 wrote: Mon Aug 05, 2024 4:13 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Aug 05, 2024 3:56 pm
Indeed, with animal tranquilisers you don't even need to get the dosage right. Just put it into the gun, squeeze the trigger and it's sleepy time for our hapless paramedics. With no one the wiser.
Yep, none of the worrying about the proper dosage. There is no question that once the drug enters the woman's blood steam its over for her.

Of course there is always a little worry about overdose so our intruders will always want to check the pulse to make sure when their mission requires the targets to be left alive.

Of course here I am not sure Green would have cared all that much.

Indeed, through the blood stream directly to the brain. And probably due to Emily's elevated stress at the time, she would have fallen unconscious all the more quicker.


Definitely, and in this case our assassins were given explicit instructions to keep all their victims alive (apart from Nikki, of course) or risk voiding their pay once word reached the don. So could imagine that Blue would have to keep checking on the pair, to gauge their pulse.

Yep, Green probably only cared about the physical enjoyment she would have at the expense of the poor women. If one of them died she could just say, "It was an accident." But luckily for our paramedics they were found relatively unhurt, not knowing much of their ordeal at the hands of Green.
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Aug 05, 2024 4:40 pm
Definitely, and in this case our assassins were given explicit instructions to keep all their victims alive (apart from Nikki, of course) or risk voiding their pay once word reached the don. So could imagine that Blue would have to keep checking on the pair, to gauge their pulse.

Yep, Green probably only cared about the physical enjoyment she would have at the expense of the poor women. If one of them died she could just say, "It was an accident." But luckily for our paramedics they were found relatively unhurt, not knowing much of their ordeal at the hands of Green.
Hmm, that could lead to an interesting scenario. We would see Green having her fun while occassionaly, with an annoyed look on her face, Blue checks the women's pulses. And we could have Blue say to Green "Can you at least be gentle. We need to keep these two bimbos alive!"
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meditions142 wrote: Mon Aug 05, 2024 5:12 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Aug 05, 2024 4:40 pm
Definitely, and in this case our assassins were given explicit instructions to keep all their victims alive (apart from Nikki, of course) or risk voiding their pay once word reached the don. So could imagine that Blue would have to keep checking on the pair, to gauge their pulse.

Yep, Green probably only cared about the physical enjoyment she would have at the expense of the poor women. If one of them died she could just say, "It was an accident." But luckily for our paramedics they were found relatively unhurt, not knowing much of their ordeal at the hands of Green.
Hmm, that could lead to an interesting scenario. We would see Green having her fun while occassionaly, with an annoyed look on her face, Blue checks the women's pulses. And we could have Blue say to Green "Can you at least be gentle. We need to keep these two bimbos alive!"

I like that. Green then looks up from fondling Laura. "Why don't you get off my back, Blue? And go stand guard in the rain like a good girl." Then before Blue retorts, she sees the headlamps of the MiB van through the ambulance windows. Green carries on with enjoying Laura. "Cut that out, Green. We've got company." Green let's out an annoyed grunt. "Don't go anywhere, bimbos. I will be right back." She then gets out with Blue and sees Ellana walk up to the reception, they then make the call.
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Aug 05, 2024 5:38 pm
I like that. Green then looks up from fondling Laura. "Why don't you get off my back, Blue? And go stand guard in the rain like a good girl." Then before Blue retorts, she sees the headlamps of the MiB van through the ambulance windows. Green carries on with enjoying Laura. "Cut that out, Green. We've got company." Green let's out an annoyed grunt. "Don't go anywhere, bimbos. I will be right back." She then gets out with Blue and sees Ellana walk up to the reception, they then make the call.
I always love scenes like that. The intruders are sitting there having their own conversation while the women they have knocked out lay there unconscious. And love Green's comment: "Don't go anywhere, bimbos. I will be right back." Green was more than happy to kill both women and now they are just play toys for her.
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meditions142 wrote: Mon Aug 05, 2024 6:40 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Aug 05, 2024 5:38 pm
I like that. Green then looks up from fondling Laura. "Why don't you get off my back, Blue? And go stand guard in the rain like a good girl." Then before Blue retorts, she sees the headlamps of the MiB van through the ambulance windows. Green carries on with enjoying Laura. "Cut that out, Green. We've got company." Green let's out an annoyed grunt. "Don't go anywhere, bimbos. I will be right back." She then gets out with Blue and sees Ellana walk up to the reception, they then make the call.
I always love scenes like that. The intruders are sitting there having their own conversation while the women they have knocked out lay there unconscious. And love Green's comment: "Don't go anywhere, bimbos. I will be right back." Green was more than happy to kill both women and now they are just play toys for her.
Me too, I remember fondly whenever I wrote my SI stories with Group 6 nonchalantly having their conversations as they are stripping their unconscious victims. I think Green is perhaps the most cruel of the 12 assassins, although Red comes close with her domination of Sharon. To her the two women are nothing but obstacles. She was disappointed that she couldn't kill them but then they turned into playthings for her amusement.
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Aug 05, 2024 9:39 pm
although Red comes close with her domination of Sharon.
The scene with Red and Sharon was indeed intriguing. Red instantly goes from basically coming on to Sharon to instantly just hitting her in the neck to knock her out. The quick change from flirt to neck chop is amazing.
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meditions142 wrote: Wed Aug 07, 2024 1:25 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Mon Aug 05, 2024 9:39 pm
although Red comes close with her domination of Sharon.
The scene with Red and Sharon was indeed intriguing. Red instantly goes from basically coming on to Sharon to instantly just hitting her in the neck to knock her out. The quick change from flirt to neck chop is amazing.
Thank you. I wanted to portray some of the assassins as the type to mix business with pleasure. With Red she was both flirtatious and a little sadistic with Sharon. First enjoying toying with the captive nurse then knocking her out cold. Whether this was true for the rest of the team I will leave to the imagination.

What I enjoyed most about this story was seeing these highly capable assassins get taken out by our heroines who were vastly superior to them in every respect. And Black learned the hard way that there is intelligent life in the milky way.
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Wed Aug 07, 2024 1:41 pm
Whether this was true for the rest of the team I will leave to the imagination.
Indeed. It was fun the way you left to the imagination what was done with Holly and Gillian after they have stripped out of their guard uniforms.

We of course know by the time Ellana and Nikki get to the security room they are conscious. However, we are left to wonder what may have happened prior to that. Oh and love how they just leave the women there with the unconscious assassin shoved in with them.
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meditions142 wrote: Wed Aug 07, 2024 1:56 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Wed Aug 07, 2024 1:41 pm
Whether this was true for the rest of the team I will leave to the imagination.
Indeed. It was fun the way you left to the imagination what was done with Holly and Gillian after they have stripped out of their guard uniforms.

We of course know by the time Ellana and Nikki get to the security room they are conscious. However, we are left to wonder what may have happened prior to that. Oh and love how they just leave the women there with the unconscious assassin shoved in with them.

Thanks, I thought it best to leave that to the readers so as not to slow the pace of the story too much. But I like to think that both Black and Indigo took their time and enjoyed Holly and Gillian. Given how distressed the two women where when they discovered by Nikki and Ellana, this could well be a possibility.


Yeah, I have an image of Holly and Gillian digging their elbows into the naked Indigo's ribs as some form of payback in that very cramped locker. So by the time they are rescued by the MiB, Indigo will be covered in bruises and the two security guards will think at least some justice was served. Right up to the point they get neuralysed and later hailed as heroes.
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