Ellana's Cultural Studies on Humanity Chapter 45:- The Ties That Bind Pt2 Breakout From Tartarus

[Stormtrooper1990]

Yep, leaving basic automatic bodily functions active and her senses as well. I wonder with the CNS disrupted and the woman in an off state, will be like an out of body experience for our young guard?

Indeed, she has probably lived in ignorance her whole life about her Vagus Nerve and has learnt the hard way of it's existence. Not to mention on how it was used so effectively against her. The poor woman might not even venture outside again.

I like to imagine the pinch causes a massive disruption of the woman's nervous system and puts her into a deep maybe even coma-like sleep (particularly perhaps if it was Kremm who attacked her). Her heart continues to beat and she can breath but aside from that she is in a deep, deep sleep.

With that said, maybe on some level, she can still sense certain things. Perhaps having a bit of an reaction when the uniform thief is removing her uniform and perhaps also exploring her body a bit in the process. That can be sexy!

And indeed she learned the hard way about that nerve that can be used to cause unconsciousness. I actually sometimes imagine a scene where and the doctors are learning. Maybe while the woman is still on unconscious from the attacked she is discovered and brought to the base's medical bay. I could picture a scene where an unconscious sentry is found and is in a medical bed. The base leader comes in and asks the doctor. "What happened? Is she dead?". The doctor replies "No, but she is deeply unconscious. We think she was given some kind of nerve pinch. It is as if her conscious mind has been shut off." The commander then says "When will she wake up? We need to questions her." The doctor replies, "I don't know. Without knowing the precise technique used on her, and what it has done to her nervous system, we can't tell when she will wake up. Or frankly if she'll ever wake up. However, in my opinion it will be several hours before she regains consciousness." The commander takes one last look at the unconscious guard says "keep me posted" and turns to leave.

It is interesting, in the original Star Trek they never talked about exactly harm was caused to the nerve pinch victims. However, from the Voyager series there was some information. I found this: "In the Star Trek: Voyager episode 'Cathexis', the Doctor inspects a crewmember who was found unconscious and observes an extreme trauma to the trapezius neck bundle, 'as though her nerve fibers have been ruptured'; and it is later revealed that the person was the victim of a nerve pinch."

So perhaps the Vulcan Nerve Pinch does cause a bit of an injury.

That's how I picture it too. Particularly in Kremm's case, when the victim receives the pinch she's switched off and essentially she's in that curious coma like state where she's still alive and basic functions are still there but her consciousness is on a "stand by" mode.


I absolutely agree! Say our infiltrator is in the process of stripping the woman down, she's already taken off the uniform and decides that while she doesn't need her victims underwear, she as a little time to explore the little cuties body. She first rolls up the girls vest/ camisole, fondles her warm soft breasts then to her surprise the woman starts to moan with pleasure. This turning on the infiltrator, encourages her to slip her end under the girls shorts to explore her labia, grinning to find out that the guard hasn't been touched yet. She explores the girls womanhood and the guard is moaning in pleasure and let's out contented sigh. Our infiltrator smiles, licks the girls juices from her fingers. "Well it seems you enjoyed that as much as I did. Tell you what?" She writes down her number and tucks it into her shorts, slapping her butt. "Look me up after all this and perhaps we can do it all again, while your consciousness. Ta ta, sweetness." She kisses the girls slightly parted lips, then stashes her in the locker.


I really like this scene, the dialogue is excellent and it would make for an excellent epilogue for a story involving the Nerve Pinch. I had been meaning to write a little discovery epilogue like this at the end of one of my stories, so I will definitely keep this mind. For added fun the doctor says. "A patrol brought her in, she was hidden in the bushes unconscious and stripped completely naked." The base commander says "Naked? What kind of sick bastard are we looking for?" The doctor replies. "That's just it. Witnesses have said they saw her walking through the base ams wasn't acting particularly strangely." The commander shakes his head. "My God! What are we dealing with?"


That's really interesting, it does make sense that the Vulcan Nerve Pinch does cause a little injury, after all physical contact is made as the woman's nerves are disrupted and her CNS short circuited. We could surmise from this exchange that the VNP ruptures these nerve fibers and renders the woman unconscious. Of course there is no telling just how long she will be asleep for.

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I really like this scene, the dialogue is excellent and it would make for an excellent epilogue for a story involving the Nerve Pinch. I had been meaning to write a little discovery epilogue like this at the end of one of my stories, so I will definitely keep this mind. For added fun the doctor says. "A patrol brought her in, she was hidden in the bushes unconscious and stripped completely naked." The base commander says "Naked? What kind of sick bastard are we looking for?" The doctor replies. "That's just it. Witnesses have said they saw her walking through the base ams wasn't acting particularly strangely." The commander shakes his head. "My God! What are we dealing with?"

You could also see an interesting dialogue between the doctor and a nurse who walks over after the commander leaves.

"Doctor, did you say she was knocked out with a pinch to her neck? How is that possible?" "Well nurse, as you know there are a lot of very important nerves in the neck. These are the link between the brain and the central nervous system. They are very vulnerable in the neck, particularly in females. A person with the correct skills and strength can attack those nerves and do anything from kill the victim to render her unconscious."

"So, did you say she may never wake up?" The doctor replies, "It is possible. However, my guess is whoever did this to her could have easily killed her if they wanted to so I assume it is meant to be temporary. We just can't tell how long."

"Did she suffer?" asked the nurse. "Well, my guess is she initially felt some significant pain both from the pinch and the attack on her nervous system. However, depending on which nerves were pinched and what was done, believe or not on some level she may have become aroused. Regardless, I am sure she was rendered unconscious fairly quickly." The nurse responds, "Amazing. I hope the catch the intruder soon. I wouldn't want to be the next victim."

"Indeed. Now, let's get back to work. I doubt sleeping beauty here will be waking up any time soon."

[Stormtrooper1990]

I really like this scene, the dialogue is excellent and it would make for an excellent epilogue for a story involving the Nerve Pinch. I had been meaning to write a little discovery epilogue like this at the end of one of my stories, so I will definitely keep this mind. For added fun the doctor says. "A patrol brought her in, she was hidden in the bushes unconscious and stripped completely naked." The base commander says "Naked? What kind of sick bastard are we looking for?" The doctor replies. "That's just it. Witnesses have said they saw her walking through the base ams wasn't acting particularly strangely." The commander shakes his head. "My God! What are we dealing with?"

You could also see an interesting dialogue between the doctor and a nurse who walks over after the commander leaves.

"Doctor, did you say she was knocked out with a pinch to her neck? How is that possible?" "Well nurse, as you know there are a lot of very important nerves in the neck. These are the link between the brain and the central nervous system. They are very vulnerable in the neck, particularly in females. A person with the correct skills and strength can attack those nerves and do anything from kill the victim to render her unconscious."

"So, did you say she may never wake up?" The doctor replies, "It is possible. However, my guess is whoever did this to her could have easily killed her if they wanted to so I assume it is meant to be temporary. We just can't tell how long."

"Did she suffer?" asked the nurse. "Well, my guess is she initially felt some significant pain both from the pinch and the attack on her nervous system. However, depending on which nerves were pinched and what was done, believe or not on some level she may have become aroused." The nurse responds, "Amazing. I hope the catch the intruder soon. I wouldn't want to be the next victim."

"Indeed. Now, let's get back to work. I doubt sleeping beauty here will be waking up any time soon."

That's an excellent scene my friend, you captured the naive fascination of the nurse and the clinical detachment of the doctor very well.

We can conclude the scene with a touch of irony; the nurse gets back to work but then realises she needs something from the storeroom just outside sickbay. She leaves and walks to the storeroom door, suddenly it opens revealing Ellana who grins. "Hi nurse, it's good you came by I just need to borrow you for a second." Before the nurse as a chance to scream, Ellana grabs a handful of her scrubs( or traditional white uniform, gotta respect the classics ) pulls her inside and gives her a little pinch. The nurse slids down the wall unconscious with an aroused moan. "Time for a quick change..." Ellana quips as she strips out of the sentries uniform then gives the nurse a quick kiss. After relieving the woman of her uniform, Ellana walks out with a new look leaving our poor nurse slumped against the wall of the cupboard naked her legs spread wide.

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That's an excellent scene my friend, you captured the naive fascination of the nurse and the clinical detachment of the doctor very well.

We can conclude the scene with a touch of irony; the nurse gets back to work but then realises she needs something from the storeroom just outside sickbay. She leaves and walks to the storeroom door, suddenly it opens revealing Ellana who grins. "Hi nurse, it's good you came by I just need to borrow you for a second." Before the nurse as a chance to scream, Ellana grabs a handful of her scrubs( or traditional white uniform, gotta respect the classics ) pulls her inside and gives her a little pinch. The nurse slids down the wall unconscious with an aroused moan. "Time for a quick change..." Ellana quips as she strips out of the sentries uniform then gives the nurse a quick kiss. After relieving the woman of her uniform, Ellana walks out with a new look leaving our poor nurse slumped against the wall of the cupboard naked her legs spread wide.

You could see a little more from the nurse "I hope you're right doctor and she'll be okay. Poor girl doesn't deserve it. She was just doing her job." And we could see more of the detachment from the Doctor: "Either way, I am anxious to see what happens. Will teach us something about who did this."

And I love the concept of the attack on the nurse. It is fun to imagine what would go through her mind when she opens the storeroom door and comes face to face with the guard she just saw unconscious in the bed. And of course she would have a brief moment to realize she is getting the same nerve pinch the doctor just told her about.

[Stormtrooper1990]

That's an excellent scene my friend, you captured the naive fascination of the nurse and the clinical detachment of the doctor very well.

We can conclude the scene with a touch of irony; the nurse gets back to work but then realises she needs something from the storeroom just outside sickbay. She leaves and walks to the storeroom door, suddenly it opens revealing Ellana who grins. "Hi nurse, it's good you came by I just need to borrow you for a second." Before the nurse as a chance to scream, Ellana grabs a handful of her scrubs( or traditional white uniform, gotta respect the classics ) pulls her inside and gives her a little pinch. The nurse slids down the wall unconscious with an aroused moan. "Time for a quick change..." Ellana quips as she strips out of the sentries uniform then gives the nurse a quick kiss. After relieving the woman of her uniform, Ellana walks out with a new look leaving our poor nurse slumped against the wall of the cupboard naked her legs spread wide.

You could see a little more from the nurse "I hope you're right doctor and she'll be okay. Poor girl doesn't deserve it. She was just doing her job." And we could see more of the detachment from the Doctor: "Either way, I am anxious to see what happens. Will teach us something about who did this."

And I love the concept of the attack on the nurse. It is fun to imagine what would go through her mind when she opens the storeroom door and comes face to face with the guard she just saw unconscious in the bed. And of course she would have a brief moment to realize she is getting the same nerve pinch the doctor just told her about.

That's excellent I like that. The poor nurse having no idea that she's just seconds away from suffering the same fate as the unlucky guard. And the doctor is about to get his wish when the nurse ends up in the bed next to the guard.


Thanks I'am glad you like it. I think the nurse would let out a little "What the hell? That's impossible!" And feel both shock and surprise as the guard she saw just a moment ago on the hospital bed is right there in front. Indeed, the nurse is going to get her very own experience on the power of the pinch.


To end the scene, the doctor's eyes widened as the nurse in brought in. "Hmm? When I said I was anxious to see what happens, I wasn't expecting this. Still the data I could get here would extraordinary, apologies nurse but I could learn a lot from you."

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That's excellent I like that. The poor nurse having no idea that she's just seconds away from suffering the same fate as the unlucky guard. And the doctor is about to get his wish when the nurse ends up in the bed next to the guard.


Thanks I'am glad you like it. I think the nurse would let out a little "What the hell? That's impossible!" And feel both shock and surprise as the guard she saw just a moment ago on the hospital bed is right there in front. Indeed, the nurse is going to get her very own experience on the power of the pinch.


To end the scene, the doctor's eyes widened as the nurse in brought in. "Hmm? When I said I was anxious to see what happens, I wasn't expecting this. Still the data I could get here would extraordinary, apologies nurse but I could learn a lot from you."

Great idea. I would like to imagine too that the guard had been pinched by Kremm. That way, even when Ellana kisses the unconscious nurse and takes her form thereby leaving the guard's form, the guard will continue to remain unconscious due to the power of Kremm's pinch.

And love the idea that the nurse ends up in the bed with the guard. Very sexy indeed!

[Stormtrooper1990]

That's excellent I like that. The poor nurse having no idea that she's just seconds away from suffering the same fate as the unlucky guard. And the doctor is about to get his wish when the nurse ends up in the bed next to the guard.


Thanks I'am glad you like it. I think the nurse would let out a little "What the hell? That's impossible!" And feel both shock and surprise as the guard she saw just a moment ago on the hospital bed is right there in front. Indeed, the nurse is going to get her very own experience on the power of the pinch.


To end the scene, the doctor's eyes widened as the nurse in brought in. "Hmm? When I said I was anxious to see what happens, I wasn't expecting this. Still the data I could get here would extraordinary, apologies nurse but I could learn a lot from you."

Great idea. I would like to imagine too that the guard had been pinched by Kremm. That way, even when Ellana kisses the unconscious nurse and takes her form thereby leaving the guard's form, the guard will continue to remain unconscious due to the power of Kremm's pinch.

And love the idea that the nurse ends up in the bed with the guard. Very sexy indeed!

Thanks. That sounds like a great idea, by the time Ellana as left the base and the nurse wakes up the guard who Kremm had attacked is still unconscious. She gets up looks at the still sleeping guard shaking her head. "That's shouldn't have been possible she's right there..." She says in the small voice, as two very familiar agents walk in, disguised as sentries walk in. "Who are you? You can't just come barging in here--." The doctor says before they are both flashed. L says. "You weren't attacked by a Zenobian shifter, you were all victims of a gas leak in this medical bay that left you all unconscious." M smiles. "Yeah, I would see about getting new filters. Wouldn't want it happening again." L scolds her with her eyes before the two take the doctors evidence and leave the ward.


Definitely! And the fact they are both dressed only in patient bibs adds to the fun and sexiness of the scene!

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Thanks. That sounds like a great idea, by the time Ellana as left the base and the nurse wakes up the guard who Kremm had attacked is still unconscious. She gets up looks at the still sleeping guard shaking her head. "That's shouldn't have been possible she's right there..." She says in the small voice, as two very familiar agents walk in, disguised as sentries walk in. "Who are you? You can't just come barging in here--." The doctor says before they are both flashed. L says. "You weren't attacked by a Zenobian shifter, you were all victims of a gas leak in this medical bay that left you all unconscious." M smiles. "Yeah, I would see about getting new filters. Wouldn't want it happening again." L scolds her with her eyes before the two take the doctors evidence and leave the ward.


Definitely! And the fact they are both dressed only in patient bibs adds to the fun and sexiness of the scene!

Actually I was thinking that before the doctor and two women got flashed perhaps we have a scene where the doctor was able to do some research. I would picture a scene where the nurse and guard are finally conscious. The doctor is questioning them while the base commander stands behind him listening.

To the nurse, "So, Jessica, explain this again? You are saying you opened the storeroom door and Amy was in there in her uniform? And she grabbed you and pinched your neck? You know that is impossible. Until 10 minutes ago Amy was laying in the bed,. She was still unconscious when you woke up for God's sake."

"I know what I saw doctor." "I am sure Jessica you think you saw it, but I have to be believe that what ever was done to you may have caused a false memory or hallucination."

The doctor turns to the guard. "So Amy, tell me what you recall?" Amy is seemingly very nervous with the commander standing there. After all, her commander is there and probably anger she failed in her sentry duty.

"I was walking my patrol route. It was quiet. I didn't see or hear anything out of the ordinary. Suddenly a huge hand covered my mouth. It seemed almost superhuman in size. Suddenly I felt another hand grab my neck. The hand lifted me into the air. I struggled and tried to call out but my mouth was still covered and I could not break free."

"I then felt a finger and the thumb of the hand on my neck adjust as if trying to find a specific spot and then I felt a sharp pain on each side of my neck. Then I woke up in here. And also, I think I heard a strange voice say "I have your uniform princess".

Of course I still like your idea of the MiB showing up since you note they were in guard uniforms so clearly two more guards have been knocked out. Just thought a bit of talk with nurse and guard first would be fun.

[Stormtrooper1990]

Thanks. That sounds like a great idea, by the time Ellana as left the base and the nurse wakes up the guard who Kremm had attacked is still unconscious. She gets up looks at the still sleeping guard shaking her head. "That's shouldn't have been possible she's right there..." She says in the small voice, as two very familiar agents walk in, disguised as sentries walk in. "Who are you? You can't just come barging in here--." The doctor says before they are both flashed. L says. "You weren't attacked by a Zenobian shifter, you were all victims of a gas leak in this medical bay that left you all unconscious." M smiles. "Yeah, I would see about getting new filters. Wouldn't want it happening again." L scolds her with her eyes before the two take the doctors evidence and leave the ward.


Definitely! And the fact they are both dressed only in patient bibs adds to the fun and sexiness of the scene!

Actually I was thinking that before the doctor and two women got flashed perhaps we have a scene where the doctor was able to do some research. I would picture a scene where the nurse and guard are finally conscious. The doctor is questioning them while the base commander stands behind him listening.

To the nurse, "So, Jessica, explain this again? You are saying you opened the storeroom door and Amy was in there in her uniform? And she grabbed you and pinched your neck? You know that is impossible. Until 10 minutes ago Amy was laying in the bed,. She was still unconscious when you woke up for God's sake."

"I know what I saw doctor." "I am sure Jessica you think you saw it, but I have to be believe that what ever was done to you may have caused a false memory or hallucination."

The doctor turns to the guard. "So Amy, tell me what you recall?" Amy is seemingly very nervous with the commander standing there. After all, her commander is there and probably anger she failed in her sentry duty.

"I was walking my patrol route. It was quiet. I didn't see or hear anything out of the ordinary. Suddenly a huge hand covered my mouth. It seemed almost superhuman in size. Suddenly I felt another hand grab my neck. The hand lifted me into the air. I struggled and tried to call out but my mouth was still covered and I could not break free."

"I then felt a finger and the thumb of the hand on my neck adjust as if trying to find a specific spot and then I felt a sharp pain on each side of my neck. Then I woke up in here. And also, I think I heard a strange voice say "I have your uniform princess".

Of course I still like your idea of the MiB showing up since you note they were in guard uniforms so clearly two more guards have been knocked out. Just thought a bit of talk with nurse and guard first would be fun.

That sounds like an excellent idea, very fun indeed and great choices on the names by the way. It makes more sense that the base commander, doctor, Amy and Jessica have a little dialogue before they are eventually flashed by the MiB, I agree. We could even have a couple of paragraphs before with L & M taking out the sentries then walking in to handle the clean up.

For the uniforms I was visualising Ellana sneaking into Area 51 and Aircraftwoman Amy wearing a set of USAF desert camouflage fatigues with black vest and hipsters underneath is taken out by Kremm, while Jessica is wearing the traditional white USAF nurse uniform with white lace bra, thong eith stockings and suspenders. For the guards taken out by L & M, they were wearing USAF Air Police dress blues; short sleeve light blue shirts, dark blue trousers with black shoes complete with blue beret.

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We could even have a couple of paragraphs before with L & M taking out the sentries then walking in to handle the clean up.

Can just picture the two sentries getting hit with stun blasts!