meditions142 wrote: Thu Aug 22, 2024 5:48 pm Another great chapter!
Some great knocks too.
First off, liked the action of the take out of Tiffany. Great to picture Ellana basically take to the ground and then straddle her before giving her the neck chop.
Then we get a wonderful neck pinch on Melanie. We also get the wonderful "Enjoy your nap" comment.
I particularly liked the wonderful take out of Angelina and Phillipa. Great the way your described the effect of the blast on the women. And the way you described Phillipa I picture her as the kind of girl I find super cute. Also loved the comment "you take blue eyes on the bench, she's your size" Adn also sexy that Phillipa was wearing a camisole.
The take out of Talitha was quite sexy. First Ellana entrances her with the pheromones then puts her to sleep with the kiss. And I really liked the image of her laying her over the counter. Then a great description of the stripping. Also liked the idea of hiding her under the counter too.
Also really enjoyed the take out of Valerie. Love to imagine her getting the neck chop and then slumping unconscious over the moped.
And of course there were plenty of other wonderful scenes!
Great new chapter!
Thanks, my friend. I'am glad you enjoyed it.
Tiffany's takeout is arguably the one I enjoyed the most, since it reminded me of the takeout of Maiwenn in Chapter 35. I enjoy writing action scenes with Ellana, who yanked Tiffany's from the Segway and straddled her so quickly the girl never stood a chance nor had a chance to scream.
Indeed, in this chapter I wanted to showcase all of Ellana's skills and represent just how far she's come on her time on earth. With Melanie's scenes, it was fun imagining the woman too engrossed in doing her makeup to notice Ellana jumping into the backseat and giving her a little pinch. And I think Melanie did indeed enjoy her nap, until the MiB showed up.
Yep, there is something so super cute about brunettes and I agree that Phillipa was perhaps the most cutest of our victims in this chapter. I definitely agree, the camisole is my favourite underwear on a victim especially if paired with a cute low cut tanga thong or a pair of hipster shorts. Although I don't know which I prefer; cropped camisoles or full camisoles? Such a tough choice. Plus, Phillipa must have had the most amazing eyes if L, who's straight, commented on them.
Indeed, I remember our conversation about featuring more kiss takedowns from Ellana where she utilises her pheromones and I'am pleased with how Talitha has turned. I agree that there is something undeniably sexy about a woman, whether it's Talitha or a receptionist being laid across her desk unconscious before being dragged to the floor to be stripped. And you can't really go wrong with hiding the naked girl under her counter, in the absence of a convenient cabinet it's a safe bet.
Thanks, I wanted to go for quick and sexy with Valerie's takeout. After all, there is something arousing about an unconscious woman slumped over her moped with her butt in the air. With the agents on her tail, the neck chop was the best solution which allowed Ellana to replace Valerie quickly and with no fuss. Even having time to completely fool.pur agents.
Thanks again for reading my friend. Next up is date night!