Ellana's Cultural Studies on Humanity Chapter 43:- On Birthday Celebrations

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meditions142 wrote: Thu Aug 22, 2024 5:48 pm Another great chapter!

Some great knocks too.

First off, liked the action of the take out of Tiffany. Great to picture Ellana basically take to the ground and then straddle her before giving her the neck chop.

Then we get a wonderful neck pinch on Melanie. We also get the wonderful "Enjoy your nap" comment.

I particularly liked the wonderful take out of Angelina and Phillipa. Great the way your described the effect of the blast on the women. And the way you described Phillipa I picture her as the kind of girl I find super cute. Also loved the comment "you take blue eyes on the bench, she's your size" Adn also sexy that Phillipa was wearing a camisole.

The take out of Talitha was quite sexy. First Ellana entrances her with the pheromones then puts her to sleep with the kiss. And I really liked the image of her laying her over the counter. Then a great description of the stripping. Also liked the idea of hiding her under the counter too.

Also really enjoyed the take out of Valerie. Love to imagine her getting the neck chop and then slumping unconscious over the moped.

And of course there were plenty of other wonderful scenes!

Great new chapter!

Thanks, my friend. I'am glad you enjoyed it.

Tiffany's takeout is arguably the one I enjoyed the most, since it reminded me of the takeout of Maiwenn in Chapter 35. I enjoy writing action scenes with Ellana, who yanked Tiffany's from the Segway and straddled her so quickly the girl never stood a chance nor had a chance to scream.


Indeed, in this chapter I wanted to showcase all of Ellana's skills and represent just how far she's come on her time on earth. With Melanie's scenes, it was fun imagining the woman too engrossed in doing her makeup to notice Ellana jumping into the backseat and giving her a little pinch. And I think Melanie did indeed enjoy her nap, until the MiB showed up.


Yep, there is something so super cute about brunettes and I agree that Phillipa was perhaps the most cutest of our victims in this chapter. I definitely agree, the camisole is my favourite underwear on a victim especially if paired with a cute low cut tanga thong or a pair of hipster shorts. Although I don't know which I prefer; cropped camisoles or full camisoles? Such a tough choice. Plus, Phillipa must have had the most amazing eyes if L, who's straight, commented on them.


Indeed, I remember our conversation about featuring more kiss takedowns from Ellana where she utilises her pheromones and I'am pleased with how Talitha has turned. I agree that there is something undeniably sexy about a woman, whether it's Talitha or a receptionist being laid across her desk unconscious before being dragged to the floor to be stripped. And you can't really go wrong with hiding the naked girl under her counter, in the absence of a convenient cabinet it's a safe bet.


Thanks, I wanted to go for quick and sexy with Valerie's takeout. After all, there is something arousing about an unconscious woman slumped over her moped with her butt in the air. With the agents on her tail, the neck chop was the best solution which allowed Ellana to replace Valerie quickly and with no fuss. Even having time to completely fool.pur agents.


Thanks again for reading my friend. Next up is date night!
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meditions142 wrote: Thu Aug 22, 2024 6:01 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Thu Aug 22, 2024 12:39 pm
Yeah, the MiBs stun pistol generates a ball of electric energy that stuns a target on contact and renders a woman unconscious for a period of up to 2 hours. It works by turning a targets CNS against them. The technology itself is alien and is standard issue for agents like L & M when bringing in a fugitive alive. Although it's now being used against the humans it was originally designed to protect.
I really love your description of the stun pistol. I like that it is actual a ball of energy that renders a woman unconscious when hit. Neat idea that "it works by turning a targets CNS against them." Something really cool about the idea of the woman's central nervous system being overwhelmed to the point it shuts her consciousness off.

It is interesting that "although it's now being used against the humans it was originally designed to protect." It is interesting the MiB do not have qualms about using it on their victims. While knocks them out quickly it does cause some brief pain as we see Phillipa "squeaked in pain as the blondes electric ball struck her in her left breast"

Indeed, it's a concept that I'am particularly fond of. Using a woman's CNS as a weapon to render her unconscious quickly and without much invasiveness. Ever since I watched that famous scene in Najica, this concept as always piqued my interest and I'am glad to do it justice; first in the SI and now in ECSH.



Yep, it was actually L & M who first begun to use the stun pistol as a means of knocking out women and acquiring their uniforms. Before them, no MiB agent had even considered using them in this regard. It does say a lot about L that she had no qualms about hurting innocents, it just goes to show the maverick in her. Whereas M is more hesitant but follows L's orders anyway, out of a sense of loyalty.

Like Najica's stun projectile, it does hurt the women. In the first instance the actual impact, then as the electric current reaches the CNS and causes the 'switch off' effect. Of course it all happens in a blink of an eye, so any pain is brief substantial if fleeting.
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Thu Aug 22, 2024 6:44 pm
Like Najica's stun projectile, it does hurt the women. In the first instance the actual impact, then as the electric current reaches the CNS and causes the 'switch off' effect. Of course it all happens in a blink of an eye, so any pain is brief substantial if fleeting.
I do like the concept that while it is painful it is over quickly. It must also be a strange sensation and the electric current causes a disruption of her CNS. And then she is basically "switched off" and its all over for her.
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meditions142 wrote: Thu Aug 22, 2024 6:51 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Thu Aug 22, 2024 6:44 pm
Like Najica's stun projectile, it does hurt the women. In the first instance the actual impact, then as the electric current reaches the CNS and causes the 'switch off' effect. Of course it all happens in a blink of an eye, so any pain is brief substantial if fleeting.
I do like the concept that while it is painful it is over quickly. It must also be a strange sensation and the electric current causes a disruption of her CNS. And then she is basically "switched off" and its all over for her.
Me too, just as long as the pain is brief and not drawn out so the cutie is knocked out without suffering too much. I think it for anyone experiencing a disruption to their CNS, it would feel bizarre. Like your whole body is being lit up like a Christmas tree then it's lights out. So a little pain followed by a deep slumber. Or at least that's what I picture.
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Thu Aug 22, 2024 1:06 pm
rufusluciusivan wrote: Thu Aug 22, 2024 1:01 pm
Yep, since Nikki and Ellana haven't had much time to bond with Ellana flying around the world so I thought it ample time to deepen their relationship and to expand on Nikki herself by introducing her mom, Deborah.
I'm not quite sure it's good news for Deborah... :lol:
Well it will certainly be a shock for her when she finds out her daughters best friend is an alien shapeshifter but looking past that, she might she the value in Ellana's abilities particularly in her line of work. ;)
(But I meant it more in the sense that becoming an important character in that kind of story means Deborah will most likely become part of clothes stealing hijinks... whether because she steals the clothes or (and?) is the one getting her clothes stolen... :oops: :P :lol: I don't see Ellana mugging her soulmate's mother (soulstepmother?), but who knows... The plot may find a way! :lol: Plus, I'm anticipating an "anti-Ellana" / a rival alien may show up at some point... Which would spell trouble for Ellana's loved ones and friends, who may become clothes stealer fodder...)
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rufusluciusivan wrote: Fri Aug 23, 2024 6:49 am
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Thu Aug 22, 2024 1:06 pm
rufusluciusivan wrote: Thu Aug 22, 2024 1:01 pm

I'm not quite sure it's good news for Deborah... :lol:
Well it will certainly be a shock for her when she finds out her daughters best friend is an alien shapeshifter but looking past that, she might she the value in Ellana's abilities particularly in her line of work. ;)
(But I meant it more in the sense that becoming an important character in that kind of story means Deborah will most likely become part of clothes stealing hijinks... whether because she steals the clothes or (and?) is the one getting her clothes stolen... :oops: :P :lol: I don't see Ellana mugging her soulmate's mother (soulstepmother?), but who knows... The plot may find a way! :lol: Plus, I'm anticipating an "anti-Ellana" / a rival alien may show up at some point... Which would spell trouble for Ellana's loved ones and friends, who may become clothes stealer fodder...)

No me neither, Ellana wouldn't mug Nikki's mum ( who's technically her soulstepmother, I guess. Thats a good interpretation) or her (potential) girlfriend, Liv after all she does have standards and lines even she won't dare cross. But that's not say Deborah herself won't be doing any clothes stealing, that's certainly a possibility. I don't see Deborah herself becoming a victim, she may be 50 but moves like a 25 year old and besides I'am not really a fan of older women being victims. Any woman between the ages of 18-45 is fair game. However, if an older woman is stealing off a younger woman ( a la Harper) then that's different. ;)


It's funny you should mention the possibility of a rival alien appearing, it's been on my mind for a while. I don't want to add any spoilers at this point but there will be a story arc that kicks off the next season, which may feature an "anti-Ellana." The trilogy itself, will be more centred on L and her relationships with the women in her life; Namely, her (estranged) daughter Rachel, Ellana herself and her protogeé M while dealing with a grave threat to the Earth and to L personally. It will be a chance for the readers to see a different side to her and not just the gruff ex marine who acts like a terminator.
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Thu Aug 22, 2024 6:32 pm
Although I don't know which I prefer; cropped camisoles or full camisoles? Such a tough choice.

I agree that there is something undeniably sexy about a woman, whether it's Talitha or a receptionist being laid across her desk unconscious before being dragged to the floor to be stripped.
As for the camisole, I think I would have to go with cropped. There is something super sexy about seeing the woman having lost her uniform laying unconscious and probably tied up wearing a cropped cami and therefore showing off her tummy and belly button.

And I agree. I like to imagine a reception at her desk, or maybe a guard sitting at a counter monitoring cameras, being knocked out and slumping over the desk or counter. The intruder/uniform thief then lifts her by her arm pits and then either sits her back in the chair to strip her or lifts her out of the chair to lay her on the floor to strip her. Don't know why, but I find that really sexy!
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meditions142 wrote: Fri Aug 23, 2024 11:31 am
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Thu Aug 22, 2024 6:32 pm
Although I don't know which I prefer; cropped camisoles or full camisoles? Such a tough choice.

I agree that there is something undeniably sexy about a woman, whether it's Talitha or a receptionist being laid across her desk unconscious before being dragged to the floor to be stripped.
As for the camisole, I think I would have to go with cropped. There is something super sexy about seeing the woman having lost her uniform laying unconscious and probably tied up wearing a cropped cami and therefore showing off her tummy and belly button.

And I agree. I like to imagine a reception at her desk, or maybe a guard sitting at a counter monitoring cameras, being knocked out and slumping over the desk or counter. The intruder/uniform thief then lifts her by her arm pits and then either sits her back in the chair to strip her or lifts her out of the chair to lay her on the floor to strip her. Don't know why, but I find that really sexy!

I definitely agree, especially if it's a nice trim tummy for a petite girl or showing a little muscle for an athletic guard. You can't really go wrong with a bound unconscious girl wearing a cropped camisole. And if you happen to be Ellana then all you have to do is pull it over the woman's head, no messing around with clasps or buckles.


I think you definitely hit the nail on the head, both are really arousing thoughts and most sexy. But how about the intruder laying the woman over her desk and stripping her? Particularly on her belly. I remember when I wrote Love Conquers All , with Siobhan and Annabelle. How Siobhan knocked out the nurse and Annabelle stripped her naked, as she was draped over the bed on her belly. Either way, the types of scenes you describe are just so sexy.
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Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Fri Aug 23, 2024 11:51 am I remember when I wrote Love Conquers All , with Siobhan and Annabelle. How Siobhan knocked out the nurse and Annabelle stripped her naked, as she was draped over the bed on her belly.
I always thought that was one of my favorite of your scenes. I actually thought it was sexy to picture Siobhan and Annabeth passionately kissing with Annabeth still in the bed while the unconscious nurse was slumped over the bed as well.
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meditions142 wrote: Fri Aug 23, 2024 12:02 pm
Stormtrooper1990 wrote: Fri Aug 23, 2024 11:51 am I remember when I wrote Love Conquers All , with Siobhan and Annabelle. How Siobhan knocked out the nurse and Annabelle stripped her naked, as she was draped over the bed on her belly.
I always thought that was one of my favorite of your scenes. I actually thought it was sexy to picture Siobhan and Annabeth passionately kissing with Annabeth still in the bed while the unconscious nurse was slumped over the bed as well.

Thanks, I think that ranks as one of my favourite all time scenes to write. I had a lot fun writing their escape and I enjoy my loving couples stealing uniforms together, i still have warm feelings when i picture that scene too. Another aspect of the scene I loved was how Ana compared the nurses naked body to Siobhans, and although she was quite cute she just didn't really compare to Siobhan.
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